by Ronin Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:41 am
The first one is nice, however there is no real flow. It's extremely cluttered. The colors are nice. I'd say it's your best piece out of these, though.
The 2nd one is rather plain to me. It's just a solid colored BG with a bunch of random brushes. They are rather dark, btw.. Also: Place your brushes behind your render so that your render isn't being covered up. I can hardly see your text in your 2nd tag, too.
I like your Midget Power stamp a lot, however. The colors are nice, and the text is amazing. I also love the postcard stamp border you have around it.
So far... make sure you place your render on top of your brushes/C4d's and try not to clutter the entire sig. If I were you, I'd start practicing with smudging. It's a really simple minded thing to try, but can be a pain at first. Look around for some smudging tutorials and I think once you master smudging, you're going to really go far.