Pokemon Signature

So I've been doing a lot of c4d signatures lately and completely neglecting 2d smudging signatures.

So here's my first try lol

If anyone has some smudging tips. . .I needs them.

i think it's nice.
although i couldn't see the pokemon at first. it took me even longer to realize it was haunter.

the "forever" is also hard to see

I told you man

I Told you about monotone man

I told you bro

I TOLD YOU ABOUT MONOTONE

Apart from that, what sage said. Render/stock too hard to see, and oh my god i didn't even notice the text.

And also,

i told you about typography bro

i told you bro

i tol-...

I'm so sorry! Please don't fire me...

Is this better?

Text unfitting, for starters.

Second, if that green, blue and red are going to change your render's colors, it means they should be light sources. In this case, neither of them looks like one. You need a proper light source, not a splatter.

Third, so it's a light source huh? So explain me why are the parts where the colors are changed dark? Namely with the green and red?

the colors on the black part of the render do look pretty strange.
the text colors don't match anything else in there, so it's a bit weird.

props for using arakune as your render though ^^
have you played Blazblue, or did you just randomly find the render without knowing who/what it was?

I actuallly like the second one, it's a very different vector based signature which gogeta doesn't know much about but i think it looks sexy xxxx

You mean vectors? I've used to do vectors sig all the time some time ago

Soz, didn't notice this had been posted in.

There is no light source. This tag was made so that all of the colors that could be taken as light were dark enough not to be. It's supposed to be a 2d splatter signature.