Hope you guys like it, and please, if you have any suggestions or comments on how I can improve: TELL ME.
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My Newest Work
Deks- Newbie
- Posts : 9
Join date : 2011-09-07
- Post n°1
My Newest Work
Hope you guys like it, and please, if you have any suggestions or comments on how I can improve: TELL ME.
Ceslum- Admin
- Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-06
Age : 30
Location : Illinois
- Post n°2
Re: My Newest Work
<3 the colors.
Text is good too. I would get rid of the border though, but I guess that's just preference.
As well, use a different render. There's an annoying black line bordering the guy.
Also maybe add some blurred spots or smudging in front of the render to give it a bit more depth and blending.
Hope I helped some.
Text is good too. I would get rid of the border though, but I guess that's just preference.
As well, use a different render. There's an annoying black line bordering the guy.
Also maybe add some blurred spots or smudging in front of the render to give it a bit more depth and blending.
Hope I helped some.
Gogeta- ________
- Posts : 200
Join date : 2011-07-27
- Post n°3
Re: My Newest Work
Not really much of a cool sig bro, sorry
Pros : Nice text, and okay placement.
Cons : Bad render
Render badly cropped, you can't see Ichigo's face at all.
The concept is bad. And it feels like you only did clouds/miniscule c4d around Ichigo and some dots.
The border is kind of bad
Add more depth by increasing the brigthness of the render (with dodge tool, for example) and sharpening it. One thing is to blend the render with the background a little to fit it, but almost making it look like it is the background isn't any better.
Pros : Nice text, and okay placement.
Cons : Bad render
Render badly cropped, you can't see Ichigo's face at all.
The concept is bad. And it feels like you only did clouds/miniscule c4d around Ichigo and some dots.
The border is kind of bad
Add more depth by increasing the brigthness of the render (with dodge tool, for example) and sharpening it. One thing is to blend the render with the background a little to fit it, but almost making it look like it is the background isn't any better.
Deks- Newbie
- Posts : 9
Join date : 2011-09-07
- Post n°4
Re: My Newest Work
The "render" that someone gave me wasn't a render at all. I had to render it as best I can (which I'm terrible at), and since the render was so small, I tried to make the surroundings draw less attention (that's why there is so little). Thank you for the comments guys
Flare ★ Graphics- Founder
- Posts : 78
Join date : 2011-09-06
- Post n°5
Re: My Newest Work
I actually like the theme of the sig just quiet a bad render.