the result of a tutorial

so i checked this 1 tutorial of this one dude and this is what i ended up with:

please dnt be too harsh but please tell me how to improove ^^

That is nearly 1000x times better than your first signatures all I have to say is WELL DONE!! You deserve the creative-node ELEPHANT



But there are a few things i don't really like

The size is very big most signatures are 500px wide MAX
2.It is very over sharpened you can do it in section to add a focal point but i don't advice doing it all over.
3.It's very hard and hard to see what is going on

KEEP UP THE WORK

I can't see it D:

This computer at school has horrid color, I'll comment again later

You should be doing work good sir!

I was waiting for class, and I am an admin here. So I figured popping in wouldn't hurt.

Very nice. The size is a bit too large for a signature and it's a bit sharp. Other than that, it's personal preference. Good job

1. Oversharpened
2. Not only is the focal very hard to see, (mainly due to being the burn tool to death) but the whole sig is dark except for that ray or something.
3. Drop the scanlines already
4. The squares at the top left and bottom right don't look good. Drop them as well
5. Only now did i noticed, the light source. Too far away. If you can't do pro lighting, add a lighting source above their head or at the bottom of the sig (depending on the lighting on the focal, which could/should be adjusted if you want to).
6. The background is also bad. I can see it being just a blurred stone texture.
You need to look for some resources. Especially backgrounds. Samburley has pretty good ones

http://samburley.deviantart.com/

Yep, that's about it. Sorry if too harsh

I think it is good. Just work on the color scheme and you shouldn't use those squares in the corners. They destroy the focus of the pic.