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    Post by Mah Nightray Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:28 pm

    This is the latest signatures

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    Post by Flare ★ Graphics Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:37 pm

    I can see you like your manga Mah Gallery  364988687

    but I can see some flaws in your work which you could improve on.

    Most noticable
    Blending: The render looks like it is sitting on top of the images instead of being involved which can actually be really easily sorted out.
    Text: On some of your sigs the text is actually impossible to read which is somethign you really don't want *Luka MIku*
    Very Empty: The signatures don't look very busy just basic brushes and a vector which you could easily change around, I can see your starting to expecriemnt with smudging in your signature, keep it up and experiment.

    These are not mine but here are some examples of very good manga signatures I hope you can see where you need to improve

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!

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    Post by HDesign Wed Sep 07, 2011 7:01 pm

    Cool i like it =)
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    Post by Mah Nightray Sat Sep 10, 2011 1:34 am

    Flare ★ Graphics wrote:I can see you like your manga Mah Gallery  364988687

    but I can see some flaws in your work which you could improve on.

    Most noticable
    Blending: The render looks like it is sitting on top of the images instead of being involved which can actually be really easily sorted out.
    Text: On some of your sigs the text is actually impossible to read which is somethign you really don't want *Luka MIku*
    Very Empty: The signatures don't look very busy just basic brushes and a vector which you could easily change around, I can see your starting to expecriemnt with smudging in your signature, keep it up and experiment.

    These are not mine but here are some examples of very good manga signatures I hope you can see where you need to improve

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!

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    Thanks for the tip, I'll try to improve ^^
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    Post by Ceslum Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:35 pm

    Blending definitely needs some work. More than a few look like the render was just slapped on there. But your colors are awesome.
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    Post by Mah Nightray Sat Sep 24, 2011 6:12 pm

    I need to return to practice! but I'm really out of time!

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