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Mah Gallery
Flare ★ Graphics- Founder
- Posts : 78
Join date : 2011-09-06
- Post n°2
Re: Mah Gallery
I can see you like your manga
but I can see some flaws in your work which you could improve on.
Most noticable
Blending: The render looks like it is sitting on top of the images instead of being involved which can actually be really easily sorted out.
Text: On some of your sigs the text is actually impossible to read which is somethign you really don't want *Luka MIku*
Very Empty: The signatures don't look very busy just basic brushes and a vector which you could easily change around, I can see your starting to expecriemnt with smudging in your signature, keep it up and experiment.
These are not mine but here are some examples of very good manga signatures I hope you can see where you need to improve
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!
but I can see some flaws in your work which you could improve on.
Most noticable
Blending: The render looks like it is sitting on top of the images instead of being involved which can actually be really easily sorted out.
Text: On some of your sigs the text is actually impossible to read which is somethign you really don't want *Luka MIku*
Very Empty: The signatures don't look very busy just basic brushes and a vector which you could easily change around, I can see your starting to expecriemnt with smudging in your signature, keep it up and experiment.
These are not mine but here are some examples of very good manga signatures I hope you can see where you need to improve
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!
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Mah Nightray- Member
- Posts : 11
Join date : 2011-09-06
Age : 31
- Post n°4
Re: Mah Gallery
Flare ★ Graphics wrote:I can see you like your manga
but I can see some flaws in your work which you could improve on.
Most noticable
Blending: The render looks like it is sitting on top of the images instead of being involved which can actually be really easily sorted out.
Text: On some of your sigs the text is actually impossible to read which is somethign you really don't want *Luka MIku*
Very Empty: The signatures don't look very busy just basic brushes and a vector which you could easily change around, I can see your starting to expecriemnt with smudging in your signature, keep it up and experiment.
These are not mine but here are some examples of very good manga signatures I hope you can see where you need to improve
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!
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Thanks for the tip, I'll try to improve ^^
Ceslum- Admin
- Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-06
Age : 30
Location : Illinois
- Post n°5
Re: Mah Gallery
Blending definitely needs some work. More than a few look like the render was just slapped on there. But your colors are awesome.
Mah Nightray- Member
- Posts : 11
Join date : 2011-09-06
Age : 31
- Post n°6
Re: Mah Gallery
I need to return to practice! but I'm really out of time!