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    Berkut
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    Post by Berkut Sun Aug 14, 2011 12:39 am

    Second Try Berkut
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    Post by Blue. Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:38 am

    getting better, but the logo doesn't really fit with the rest
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    Post by Ceslum Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:57 pm

    What he said about the logo, did you make it? Because it's awesome


    It also looks like the render was badly cut and I don't care much for the glowing outline on it, makes it stand out a bit much imo.
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    Post by Gogeta Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:56 am

    Flaws (IMO)

    badly cut render
    render needs to blend better with background

    Good things

    Lighting is fine
    the concept is very interesting although it's a bit bad handled

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