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    Post by Madara Uchiha Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:12 am

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    I'm kind of new to photoshop would enjoy some CnC :3
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    Post by Blue. Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:40 am

    Hope everyone knows what CNC means

    Contructive critisism

    I can see you were going to improve your flow in this signature by placeing the stock on the right instead of the generic Center also the C4Ds closest to him are pretty good but the large one in the center is acting as a second focal point which is distracting the user from the mian one.

    I would say move it all slightly left
    get rid of the large C4D
    and experiment from there.

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    Post by Madara Uchiha Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:50 am

    I was going to not have him all the way right but the render I found of him like this had his right arm cut off where it is and I would have preferred to not have the cut off.

    Also I see what your saying now that I take a second look at it the big orange/black one I don't really like now either Naruto Siggy 1071211947

    I'll be definitly making a second version of this and post it to see if people like it more Naruto Siggy 1071211947 thank you for the CnC.
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    Post by Ronin Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:55 pm

    The render needs to be following the 3rd's rule. It doesn't look very good on the very right side. Your c4d's are too dark and are distracting. The background doesn't match the c4ds either. Naruto Siggy 3483496927
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    Post by Ceslum Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:25 am

    Text is good ^_^

    But unfortunately everything that Ronin said Naruto Siggy 3483496927

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