Reptile

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give hard crit I want this to be sups epic

You want hard crit here we go.

The text looks bland and dull

I can see what your trying to do woth the simplistity and layer but
it looks like a unexperienced gimper has had a go!

The clouds with the white oulines looks really odd.

Also add a radial gradient from a lighter blue to a darker blue from the moon.

The small pattern lines i can't see why they are there and don't really like them.

Was that harsh enough?

the background is a part of a mortal kombat stage so the outline is already there, not much i can do about it unfortunately
I want the background to be a clusterf*k color orgy, moon included so in honesty i dont think im going to add a gradient to the moon. I'll try it out but i dont know if it's gonna stick
all the other stuff I'll consider and touch on when i go to edit it
thanks man :]

I don't mean gradient "The Moon" i ment behind it as if light is radiating out of it.

ohh ok i see what you're saying

My turn my turn!

I like the poping outness, but the hand isn't soft enough, it's pretty choppy.

I think the lines should be behind the dude, not in front. That or add lines to the hand sticking up, so it looks a little more like it's supposed to be there.

Maybe run a dodge brush over the centers of the clouds to lighten them up some?

Go flippin crazy with splatter and swirl brushes! (<- not recommended, but it'd look funky sweet)

update

the arm is supposed to be grainy, that's how the render looks

Ooh, I like the lighter clouds :3

yay! ::

Maybe with all the extra light, you could dodge around the edge of Reptile facing the moon. (just the edges, leave the middle the same color)

You might also want to give the colorful bg a little texture, like lighten a smudged picture of a bush over it ::

And the font could use some work. A clean font would be best, maybe with a gradient on it? And a thicker line under it extending across behind the render? (that line is just me, I like underlining my text lol)

I like the font and it's looking better than it was.

i like the font as well and UNDERlining isn't my thing haha
I'll search for some textures and see what I can come up with