Piaf... the sexy killer

Well finally i finished this draw.... after 3 days of annoying people for critics its like my 2nd draw in a PC maybe later ill upload the first one but i dont like it too much


So... she is Piaf (Sparrow i think is the translation from french) gorgeous killer lady.... not much to say i think

selfcritics: the face can be better, the nose can be drawn better, shirt looks awkward gots no gravity, maybe was because it was looser before but some friends told me to get it more skinny and i rush some skinnier shirt


Edit: this was drawn in Corel Painter Essentials 4 e.e" and painted in Photoshop

I think that the shirt is too triangley is you look a shirt sorta sticks to the chest :P:
And shirt also have folds in it

You could work on the shadows around the breasts as well. I wasn't sure if she was bending toward me, or facing away for a few minutes of looking at it.

Yeah... the same things they said. :P Other than that, I like the style.

Biggest problem with this piece is that it has no concept. Nothing gives away any background, taste or style of the character. It is just a woman with long hair, pink shirt and black pants. You need more detail to make the character interesting.

Idk, there's somethig on her face that doesn't please me, anyways, nice job.

i like her hair (:

^^^

I agree completely